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all for love
She yearns for L O V E
Your first love....
As you say
has gone away....
left you loving astray.....
recalling on hay!
have another one from today...
so many loves in this poem...
read by so many
just ...do away
love is sweet
when you say
love me just once
but love be true o boy
what a lovely joy
what will I ever do without you?
You alone are my life long beau
My sweetest heart
''I love you...'''
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alidzain
Fri, 2015-07-24 17:27
simpld
and yet very likeable. hmm though I wonder what Stan would say about repeating the ''love'' word many times.
Alid
lovedly
Fri, 2015-07-24 18:44
in 17 lines she repeatded it 27 times
love
..love
......love ,,,,
love
....loveeeee
hence birth of ma poem
Stan will LOVE it
OOOO LOVE
Sparrow
Fri, 2015-07-24 19:00
Loved
Loved the love, where love seemed to love itself.
Love is supreme love is pure love is just love.
Now Unconditional love is another love, this love is eternally loved, a spiritual thing loved by all in love with all,
Yours loved, love, Ian..Lol
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lovedly
Fri, 2015-07-24 21:49
love is your love... by this Loved
Love is your love... by this Loved
all is love
even when one is harsh
love is meant to convey happiness
all its lovely way
but when one repeats
love, love and love
again and again
it places on one’s mind
a damn strain
does he love me?
alas in vain
none the less
loves come in
let it flow from without to within
love is he who is lovely
and loved by this sweet bard
called Lovedly
can you still, love this egoistic
self seeking one
Jess may call a bastard
whiner
what the fucks
wants this loved one
only love
like an eight year old damsel
with legs above
as says my master’s voice
love now you may rejoice.
weirdelf
Sat, 2015-07-25 17:12
Cloy
One of your worst and badly written.
Repetetition can be effective, but not the word 'love'. it is almost as bad as the word 'beautiful'.
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lovedly
Sat, 2015-07-25 19:40
sorry u did not understand this one
the gal repeated love 27 times in 17 lines
i twisted her for doing it
Jess u re read it