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some so many now say
Gratitude
What does one lose?
in being kind
just you I ought to remind
read my poetry and unwind
your mind
a newer vein of poetic flood
now you are bound to find
Some say my poetry is becoming
Shakespearean
like sublime
they must be much more kind
than anyone can conceive me
like having the Bard’s mind
He must be groaning and turning
Oh god
have you again sent me?
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geremia
Tue, 2015-12-08 20:22
I hear you, my friend. You
I hear you, my friend. You are not alone. I posted a poem in Italian A CHE PRO? I am curious to see what effort one will put into deciphering the poem. It can b e done, and my message is clear.
joe
lovedly
Tue, 2015-12-08 23:07
thanks a lot Joe
please post English version here
we'd love to know
Frankly speaking
if i compile my poetry
will some one buy and read it ?
frank opinion please kindly
Joe I value you
as you are a real poet QUALIFIED POET
others mostly r like me
Geremia
Wed, 2015-12-09 00:41
you have no reason to doubt
you have no reason to doubt yourself.
joe
lovedly
Wed, 2015-12-09 10:29
Joe
you are the only pearl
in a lonely oyster
one would love to unfurl
you hold my
only balding curl
alidzain
Wed, 2015-12-09 13:07
loved
hi!
sometimes I read
but i'm lost in my mind.
other times i read
and my stress unwinds.
sometimes i disagree
but refuse to speak
because i respect thee
and refuse to bicker.
I read you whenever i can
never you mind,
my friend
Alid
lovedly
Wed, 2015-12-09 13:43
hahahhaa
i also do u====s... no?