Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
The Man Who Fell To Earth
Would-be
heroes and star men, rainbow serpents
and young Americans
knocking on death's door. Listen to the
bones speaking with alligator teeth as they
tear themselves from flesh. Listen to life's
musical interpretation of atoms floating
somewhere in stardust.
Last few words:
One of my musical heroes. David always reinvented himself through his musical genius. I think poets need to have that Will-O'-The-Wisp ability, too. Otherwise we stagnate.
*In the villa of Ormen stands a solitary candle,
in the center of it all, your eyes."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kszLwBaC4Sw
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
Comments
Esker
Tue, 2016-01-12 09:15
thin white duke
sharp as a blade
hinged the scissor cutting
cloth to the new deck of visions
he was unafraid
of his genuis
excellent poem to david
!
we all miss him!
alidzain
Tue, 2016-01-12 10:09
hmmm
interesting.
Alid
scribbler
Tue, 2016-01-12 14:11
Hi Anna
You beat me to the punch in posting this tribute to a man who had tremendous effect on the arts........I still might post a version of my own once I think I have it right lol. Enjoyed the read........stan
Geezer
Tue, 2016-01-12 19:58
The man who fell to earth...
has gone back to the heavens. A fitting tribute to him from one who understood his genius. ~ Gee
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Kailashana2
Fri, 2016-01-15 12:07
Thank you all for reading.
Thank you all for reading. We shall miss the chameleon. ~Anna
btw don't know if his most recent tube was open-able in my comments.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kszLwBaC4Sw
Kailashana2
Fri, 2016-01-15 12:11
Yo Scribbler, what's wrong
Yo Scribbler, what's wrong with having 20 poet's homages?
Did I miss yours?
scribbler
Fri, 2016-01-15 19:31
Nothing is wrong with it lol
I'm still in process of writing mine. Being mostly a rhyming poet I want to be sure the thing is done right without the feel of hash forced rhymes and also with a free enough "feel" to it to not clash with his life style...............stan
Sparrow
Fri, 2016-01-15 19:18
Our Anna
A lovely tribute to a loss of such a multitude of fun and near excellence,
The heaven will take a while to adjust to such a roving Spirit.
Yours as always Ian .
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti