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smiles always last
Smiles only
but not like mine
This smile took many hearts away
only in one now it stays today
each and every night all say
but many a times
he looks another way
to compare your smile
with someone elses all say
but there lies no truth in that
your smile is aging maybe
but still spills youth
on many daily
your smile can be compared
with by mine only
come smile at me
will ye surely
a poets smile lasts a lifetime
yours will also
along with mine
maybe longer if wishes divine!
with me then
twill still be fine...
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Rula
Mon, 2016-04-18 00:13
Smiles
Never age Lovedly. How true!
Thank you for sharing.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Rula
Mon, 2016-04-18 00:14
Smiles
Never age Lovedly. How true!
Thank you for sharing.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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lovedly
Mon, 2016-04-18 00:47
kindness Rula
your appreciation is like a tonne of honey
churned out of an ocean of buzzing bees
Keith Logan
Mon, 2016-04-18 12:16
A smile
is always a good thing. As an old song said,
Though you may wear the best,
You're never fully dressed
without a smile.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines
lovedly
Mon, 2016-04-18 13:15
the best dressed
is fully undressed
but has only a smile
did you not see
THE TITANIC
she still smiles
at me !
Keith Logan
Wed, 2016-04-27 15:45
Or as May West once said..
Come up and see me sometime, I'll have nothing on except the radio.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines
lovedly
Sun, 2016-05-01 11:03
ha ha great
you will be surprised
when you see me
only with my tv on
hahaha
friend
you make me smile
nice poet u
lovedly
Fri, 2021-09-24 17:03
did you
SMILE