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Zealous or jealous
Jealousy is limited to smaller minds
those who can't see beyond their nose
the ocean is vast
it encompasses the whole earth
and
in winter keeps all cold
and preserved as in an iceberg
why should you even imagine
the ocean can be jealous
you must only be
the tip of the iceberg
lonely bee
have you ever imagined
what it’s like to be a vast ocean
of empathy like me....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Vivovon
Tue, 2016-09-06 14:37
Empathy
Well said.
xxxxx
lovedly
Tue, 2016-09-06 14:47
some need empathy
many seek sympathy
which one do you
Vivovon
Tue, 2016-09-06 19:27
Love
I need lots of LOVE.
xxxxx
lovedly
Tue, 2016-09-06 20:02
great we all hanker
4 it