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Hello Friends
It has been a while
I am not sure I have
Much to offer
Not sure if you
Remember who i am
A lot has happened
Since I left
I am not the same
But are we really ever the same
We evolve with time and changes
Good or bad
We live, we learn, sometimes we learn again
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
Pugilist
Thu, 2017-03-23 21:18
My Moderate Criticism
Is that you should request the raw truth.
It is entirely up to you but I, for one, will never critique anything that is asking for anything less than the raw truth.
We all have to operate at our level of comfort, but you should know the moderate criticism you receive will be less valuable to your growth as a writer.
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Jonathan Moore
lonlyhrtsclub13
Thu, 2017-03-23 21:32
Thank you
I am actually not new to this site. I have been away for a year or so so that was more or less my way of saying i am back. Not my best writing but there is more to come.
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Esker
Thu, 2017-03-23 22:43
welcome back Carrie!
I like this short poem
grounded
with good sound perspective
and feel
i remained at the post while my
life crashed about me too
took four years..
i am changed....for the better
a tough old go somethings
happy to see U back!
Mr Wolf!
lonlyhrtsclub13
Fri, 2017-03-24 06:46
Thank you
It has been a long road and still some miles to go...glad you are doing well, Mr. Wolf
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
lonlyhrtsclub13
Fri, 2017-03-24 10:13
Thanks
Good to be back
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Geezer
Fri, 2017-03-24 15:21
Glad to see...
you back. We hope that you will find some inspiration and ways to grow as a poet. We enjoyed the writes that we shared before. ~ Gee and Killer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lonlyhrtsclub13
Fri, 2017-03-24 17:13
Thank you
I will add something more substantial when time permits....looking forward to writing new material
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Keith Logan
Fri, 2017-03-24 16:25
Hello, nice to meet you
Of course I won't critique your write, which I see more as an introduction than a genuine attempt at poetry. I hope to interact with you in the future. If you are not writing much new stuff at the moment, may I suggest you post some of your old works which will be new to people like me. If you do that you can also include some history, when it was written, whether it gained much feed back, that kind of thing.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines
lonlyhrtsclub13
Fri, 2017-03-24 17:14
Hi
Nice to meet you. I am a rather old poet on here. I took a bit of a breather and am now slowly getting back at it. Please feel free to read some of my older material.
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Sparrow
Sat, 2017-03-25 20:02
Carrie
Lovely to see you here again, I notice that you say there have been changes in your life.
Life is hard sometimes, but always remember that we are here for you.
I have been here many years now and have worn many cloths in my writing, I miss Nevermore I hope you have returned with her.
Digit has been away and there has been little news , even Killer has gone quiet.
They are due another beach party, will you pick the venue this time I shall take notes and send Digit an invite also I will talk to Gee to see if Killer can take a break and join us???
There are many thongs in this life that wear us down but in writing we can heal,
Take care and nw we care, Yours Ian. xx
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
Sparrow
Sat, 2017-03-25 20:05
Carrie
There is an Echo I aw it but couldn't hear it, Just the previous comment is the real MacCoy....
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lonlyhrtsclub13
Sun, 2017-03-26 17:40
Hi Ian
Nevermore is here, she is just quiet. As things settle down, there is alot going on, she will resurface.
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"