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Stainless lovers Year 2010
Stainless lovers
This poem was composed
after reading a poet's version
of self love
and
a state of idealism.
I do hope
it does justice
to the poetic love
one of idealism...
Stainless Love
I have no doubt
that you were sleeping
as those words rolled out
neither the sun had set,
nor were you dreaming.
Perhaps 'twas early morn by then,
Rise my friend
above the soiled sheets of pain,
love is the only beauty in life
that does never at all stain
even after all love has drenched
in rain
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
lovedly
Wed, 2017-11-22 08:21
Steph,you are the kindest poet
I have come across .
I am an aged person
but my mind
works at the level
of the readers
who appreciate my worth
And you really
young lady are one such a one
I have come across many
about the Internet
on sites I deliver my sermons.
God Bless you lady,
if there be one. .
amen
Keith Logan
Thu, 2017-11-23 07:41
I agree with Steph
To me, this is one of your best poetic outpourings ever. It says so much so succinctly and with such verve.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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lovedly
Thu, 2017-11-23 08:05
Kindness Keith
I was wondering why you now
don't come to read me
thank you very much
This was composed long ago
when I was yet
a novice
poet
Keith Logan
Thu, 2017-11-23 08:12
I still read as much as I can
but have little time for commenting so try to concentrate on newbies.
Definitely no slight intended.
Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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lovedly
Thu, 2017-11-23 09:09
thank you .... I am a piddllie in front of many still
some new bees are intriguing
I agree
but once in a way do read
my naked tree