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When He Whispers
I hear Him, when He whispers
and, the air around me suddenly turns warm,
not like an epiphany
more like the air has thoughts, and it takes a different "form",
I'm allowed to know all, the reasons, "why?".
My soul awakens,
allowing the pureness of His energy to take hold,
as if I had a choice to resist,
then, I'd miss the message my spirit's told;
and I feel love, enough, to cry.
I hear His whispers,
they have a way to "clutch" my throat, if when I talk
I pause, and I listen,
and, my direction's clear about which way, to walk;
and, on His whispers, I rely.
A peaceful "goodness",
treats my senses to a "rush", that would "shame" the sea;
and, I feel much better
from the heavens opening up, to smile on me;
my smile floats up, to greet the sky.
I love His whispers,
when I lean close to hear, I may miss, everything that you may say;
so, you'll forgive me,
but, I had to listen to Him, help me find my way;
because, when He whispers.....I must pause enough, to try.!
Comments
docmaverick
Thu, 2011-02-03 09:46
Thakn-you, Shirl...
..I think I'vegot an inspirational/religous book, in the "works"; I really DO appreciate, your encouragement!
1-4-3,
doc.
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docmaverick
Thu, 2011-02-03 09:48
I'm pleased...
..that you approved of it I think this one is the Title Poem, of my inspirational book.
thanx, again...
....doc.
Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
david a. goodwin #{:>{)} @==
docmaverick
Fri, 2011-02-04 02:36
Thanx, Ian...
..I'm trying to come up with the "theme" for this inspirational book.
Thanx.....Really! I may use this one, now that it caught your discerning, eye!
later,
doc.
Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
david a. goodwin #{:>{)} @==