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Smile and be Happy
Smile
as long as you can
Shed a tear
that also of joy
O woman
O man
life is full
of endless pains
why add more
for no purpose
nor gains
love life
as it comes along
live each day happily
as long as to this Earth
we all belong
live a life
full of happiness
sing a sweet song
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Geezer
Fri, 2020-02-21 10:00
Sing...
your little heart out, lovedly! 'Tis true, 'tis true, a song a day keeps the heart young and gay! ~ Gee.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Fri, 2020-02-21 10:46
yeah gay
but of olden days Gee
Geezer
Sat, 2020-02-22 10:01
I wasn't
thinking any other way, lovedly.
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sat, 2020-02-22 11:18
lol
humour is life GEE
gay is just a mile stone in life
which way for whom
heaven and only he knows
be happy
I like you frankness
Eumolpus
Fri, 2020-02-21 17:52
nice song
this would really make a nice song. It looks easy, but it isn't. the words fits.
I'd try to find someone to put it to music.
Not me, Alas!
Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings
lovedly
Fri, 2020-02-21 23:43
''I'd try to find someone to put it to music....''
Wow Eumol
that will be lovely
Thanks
scribbler
Sun, 2020-02-23 16:21
Hi Loved
We must treasure age as it's a privilege denied many
lovedly
Mon, 2020-02-24 00:25
yeah rgds
thanks for your invaluable sayings
stan
lovedly
Mon, 2020-03-02 07:12
very few SMILE
ON NEO