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Weathers weather
Summer is too darned bloody hot
scorching killing
Rains by gosh
one gets drenched
weathers weather away
Spring, oh I forgot it comes much earlier
hope it brings…
Autumn is deadly it erodes
leaves trees nude and exposed
my entire roses die too
hardly any survive,
the way i wish them to.
Winter comes and the heating is on,
it’s not so much as the cold that kills,
But the meter reading,
my, the electricity bill
how I wish there weren’t any seasons
the sun stayed beneath the horizon
and only the moon gave its coolness
as we sleep in our amours lifelessness
and do that what we always do
and I’m sure tis your wish too.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
judyanne
Mon, 2012-08-06 15:37
i have no idea why loved
this is such a waffle, but i so love it
really, the more i read it the more i like it
i wouldn't change a thing
love judy xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
loved
Tue, 2012-08-07 12:43
sometimes when I read others grumble...
I too tumble
but then I compose my off cuffy ones …
some senselessness ones
this is such a one…
still you love it
that's the whole fun
poetry makes me smile
and I help others also follow me
those who cry
I shake them up too you see
just simply follow me
I am the master of free verse
off the cuff creative poetry
humour I must all of thee
which accomplish
very few poets like me.
loved
Ian.T
Fri, 2012-08-10 10:01
Loved
Whether tiz better to put up with the weather,
Or whether tiz fit to hibernate all year.
The weather you describe is whether to hide
Or to weather the weather outside.
Whether this makes sense or whether not
I shall weather the storm after,
Whether I survive or not.
Will depend on the Weather lol.
Oh! did I say a fair Weather write there young Bard,
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2012-08-10 12:26
you weather away my thoughts all about the weather i ani't too
sure ..
well i kept composing in the subject column
my mind had weathered away,,
i forgot all about the weather
but i am not too sure
whether i strayed away..
Perhaps I did ..
weather...owing to to hot weather today
loved
lovedly
Fri, 2020-11-06 20:04
only Ian read it
ere
Breakinglogic
Tue, 2021-02-09 00:24
Please, let us at least have
Please, let us at least have that brief, wonderful time between spring and summer
☆ raffy
lovedly
Tue, 2021-02-09 11:18
hi BL
how did u manage this old summery tree
ah thanks seasons are all ours to enjoy now it is snowing daily