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be MERCI FULL GODS
God's- Smaller- - Mercies
Women love GOD
more than their
smaller men
he never at all
troubles 'em
man never spares
a moment
without 'em
let's enjoy
with our women
let her love her god
how does it matter
when we are busy
she is happy
GODS watching
looks after her safety
kids would be coming
She very much needs
a day care attendance
God is always happy
to help 'em
let them love
more of god
also
bless her soles
Omen
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Gracy
Sun, 2020-12-06 16:44
Dear Teddy, I'm intrigued by
Dear Teddy, I'm intrigued by your poem. I like the title and theme, but I don't understand the matter of women and men loving/or not loving God. Could you explain a little?
All the best, Gracy
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lovedly
Sun, 2020-12-06 17:39
Ma'am did u mean to address me
well a guy composed a poem
his wife s always praising
God
so he said let her
as long as she does not forget me
though 'm no
LORD- GOD
Let her pray whenever
I'm busy
she so does
now her more
he loves
lovedly
Mon, 2020-12-07 13:05
OLD AGE
May be 15
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