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I WE THEE
I'm nearing 83
may soon be joining
those in the universe
who now with each other
distantly silently converse
this verse is about those
who have become ashes
else are buried comfortably
six feet beneath
gradually moths will have a feed
may take years
who knows
Do we
or
yee
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
funmzy Artz
Sat, 2022-03-26 04:24
Great.
The poem is a great one. Emotional and truly relatable. Love the use of "ye".
@funmzy
Candlewitch
Sat, 2022-03-26 09:56
hello Lovedly,
I admire the solemnity of this piece. I am seventy-one just this last February 18th I turned . bless you.
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Sat, 2022-03-26 12:29
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Cats
though belated
you have a long way
Since you r a PISCES
it's a dual sign
hence _edyx
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-03-27 11:14
dear lovedly,
actually I am an Aquarian on the cusp of Pisces. I have the blessings of both signs.
last night I fell down while backing up I tripped on the wooden strip that holds down the carpet. I twisted my right knee and hit my head very hard. Steven dialed 911 and both two police officers came and two ambulance attendants. they took my vitals and got me on my feet again. I was very lucky!
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-03-27 12:13
Sorry for your accident
do recover soon in old age one has to take care of such injury. Glad 911 helped you tc Cats