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ALL DREAMS DON'T COME TRUE
Last night
I was half asleep
singing my new songling
poem
O Maria Maria Maria
I was doggy tired
@81 old age
could not come out of my cage
O what a midnight rage
my dreams kept me engaged
now I can't recall
those words which come
if at all like a rainbow
from a distant horizon
blind eyes cant see
Will one day a Milton I be
or deaf as Beethoven was they say
composed musical poems all day
was maestro of his day
Deaf as me may be
one day
Lord Byron
Milton Beethoven or Wordsworth
I could be
Shakespeare is to the world so dear
him furious I won't like to see
But Robert Frost
I could be
frozen as ice is in Iceland
yet most say
Pablo's duplicate
Ah!
what an exceptional sign of glee
for me
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2020-07-23 17:32
All Dreams Don't Come True
Hi, Lovedly,
You are correct - not all dreams come true. Many times they take a detour. This is a very energetic poem, full of anticipation and desire. I noticed the word 'songling'. I'm not familiar with this word, but I really like it!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Thu, 2020-07-23 17:50
'songling newer words I hve created so many moderize miss L
beautifuller ==a boy as beautiful as her
muchly== much ado about much=many
soonly why soon sooner soonest------- just say soonly..... modify the English
Hope you know
Shakespeare also did so
all poets must grow then glow
Lavender
Thu, 2020-07-23 17:52
Songling
I like it muchly!
L
lovedly
Thu, 2020-07-23 18:01
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u hve created
poetree
fairingly haha
lovedly
Thu, 2022-03-31 21:50
THOSE WHO LOVE DREAMS READ THIS
YOU WILL FALL ASLEEP READING IT
Candlewitch
Fri, 2022-04-01 09:16
dear friend lovedly,
you don't have to be like any of those people that you mentioned. because you are YOU and that is special enough/ YOU are beautiful!
*warm hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Fri, 2022-04-01 12:24
BEHOLD CATS
BEAUTY LIES in the BEHOLDERS eyes
Yours this time.
Thanks