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A flamboyant flower
A flamboyant flower
taunts and
towers .
Over every
clever
clean green
clover .
That is left
to shrivel
itself away
within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2022-04-11 18:05
The sibilant Ess...
snakes its way through this entire poem! I thoroughly enjoyed this! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
Mon, 2022-04-11 20:32
Thank you
And I thoroughly enjoy your company.
Alliteration I use or alliterate one letter so it doesn’t get convoluted and it will have a nice flow.
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-04-12 08:15
hello Edward,
within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.
sounds like a get-together-dinner with my family!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
I hope you are well
*
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Edward nigma
Tue, 2022-04-12 08:26
Thank you
Thank you for your comment I fully enjoy your presence.
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-04-15 13:45
I think you are writing better than ever
IMO a large improvement! Nice work!
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Edward nigma
Fri, 2022-04-15 14:35
Thank you
Well when you get used to writing the more you write. The more you will improve.
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.