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My Love, My Rotting Leaves (Part 2 round robin)
Rise! pale white crocus of spring
Eternal love that never dies
Mortician’s stitches, her limbs now stirring
My would be bride opens her eyes
No apparition or mirage
Neither psychoactive effects
Of ganja smoke or liquid ghosts
Could make my lover sit erect
She scans the scene with empty eyes
That come to rest upon my gaze
She smiles big and opens wide
Let me tell you what she says…
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Last few words:
Continuing the saga…
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Fri, 2022-08-05 20:14
Game on
I will have my submission in a little while, tomorrow morning at the latest.
~RoseBlack~
RoseBlack
Fri, 2022-08-05 22:28
Am I ending this
Am I finishing this?
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Sat, 2022-08-06 06:14
dear RB,
I got confused when people stopped posting their entries under my lead post in my comments section....is anyone missing from the line-up? I thought Mark was supposed to be last? oh, my head hurts...still sick with hard coughing spells.
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
RoseBlack
Sat, 2022-08-06 06:54
Feel better
I thought I was going after Gee and am now confused. I will copy and paste everyone's together when I get the computer at work and add mine for an ending.
~RoseBlack~