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A DREAM IN PARTS
A DREAM IN PARTS
Just close your eyes
believe me
the same dream came
on two nights in continuum
'''No imagination ''
The first part sought presence
at cremation
the second day it came to say
not to come
the family has run amuck at random
no need to come
cremation done
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Dreams do they come true I ask you
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-12-01 11:10
dear Lovedly,
after all these years in "our" company... I think we have finally warped you. I Love It!!!
* love & hugs, Cat
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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Thu, 2022-12-01 11:31
Thank you Cats
hope ur now well You missed a good poem
IF ONLY I HAD MET YOU EARLIER
Kindly review
thank you
lovedly
Geezer
Thu, 2022-12-01 14:01
Who knows...
what dreams lie in the hearts and minds of men?
Do they come alive if they have enough of some kind of force?
What is the magic of dreams?
Can they predict the future? Hmmmm...
I'm afraid that even after a big-send off, you will keep hanging around, yelling about how soon people forget. LoL
We won't forget too soon, don't worry. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Fri, 2022-12-02 01:31
Gee you are an INSPIRATION
It is my aspiration
from the Beyond
as you still insist
does exist
I shall send violin invisible strings
loaded with Romantic songs
these alone across the GLOBE
are common
You know it....
as long as men love women
now include the gender common
LOVE can never be forgotten
Sing a song
come along
Gee is the music of NEO
and will stay far on
till we love the Neos singing
a sweet love song
Lavender
Fri, 2022-12-02 19:07
A Dream In Parts
Hello, Lovedly,
A fickle dream - it tells you yes, then the next night tells you no. It's no wonder the family has run amuck at random. I would disagree with "No imagination." Your poetry, like your dream, is wonderfully alive with imagination. Thank you!
Lav
lovedly
Sat, 2022-12-03 01:54
Thanks Lav
nice interpretation