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Little Noises
There are sounds we never hear
Like spiders walking across a mirror
Or ants moving tons of sand
And bees that on flowers land
A million sounds that are so near
Yet never reach the human ear!
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Comments
Rula
Mon, 2023-01-30 03:04
Hello Clentin
I wonder if this is a repost. I'm sure I commented on it.
Love the theme and how simple it reads yet so deep and well excuted.
Best wishes.
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Clentin
Mon, 2023-01-30 02:24
I wanted to see if additional
I wanted to see if additional comments were needed or should I expand, keep the same open or change anything from current presentation
Rula
Mon, 2023-01-30 03:05
I find nothing
needed to add. See what others have to say
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Clentin
Mon, 2023-01-30 10:50
Thank you
Thank you
Alex Tanner
Mon, 2023-01-30 18:43
Little Noises.
Simple, easy to read, as poetry should be. I liked it a lot. Alex
Clentin
Mon, 2023-01-30 23:32
Thank you I appreciate your
Thank you I appreciate your comments
Jackweb
Thu, 2023-02-02 15:19
Really liked
The several imageries scattered in the poem. It left you wondering and thinking... This drives ones mind to picture many things in one spot. A profound brevity.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Rula
Sun, 2023-02-05 06:13
Congratulations!
Such a deserved win.
Good job!
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Clentin
Sat, 2023-02-11 15:24
Thankyou.
Thankyou.
When I wrote is I was thinking about trees falling in the woods, we don’t see or hear them but they still make noise when they fall?
Good comments
Thank you
Clentin
Sat, 2023-02-11 15:24
Thankyou.
Thankyou.
When I wrote is I was thinking about trees falling in the woods, we don’t see or hear them but they still make noise when they fall?
Good comments
Thank you
Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-02-11 16:12
hello Clentin,
I read your poem, I liked it very much as none of your rhymes felt forced. I thought about things that go bump in the night!
* hugs, Cat
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