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My Tat Tits
My tattoos, bitter and mild
Never able to feed a child
Older now with veins of blue
You won’t find beer in the tit tattoo
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Mon, 2023-06-12 14:40
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Geezer
Mon, 2023-06-12 10:41
Reminds me...
of some women that I know. I am/was a biker and my wife has tattoos. We are all older now, and the tattoos that we all have are spread out, and I see them as they have gone from early twenties, to now in the late fifties and sixties. Yep, I recognize them from your description, LoL ~ Geez.
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Ruby Lord
Tue, 2023-06-13 11:49
Thanks Geez, sadly, I don't
Thanks Geez, sadly, I don't have any tattoos, yet. Ruby :)
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Geezer
Wed, 2023-06-14 13:39
I'm sure that...
IF... the right one comes along, it will be the right one! As Obi says, Au natural is very becoming in its own right. My wife didn't get her first one until about fifteen years ago, and we have been together almost forty years! Now, she has three! [I have nine
not including cover-ups of crude tats]. It is interesting that you still entertain the idea of getting one. ~ Geez.
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Seren
Tue, 2023-06-13 08:37
Dear Ruby
I was a biker and biker's wife once upon a time, yet I have never found that tattoo that I felt was ME, I think this is a brilliant I absolutely love this one. All my girls have tats and have pestered me for years to get one and I have always said I will, but it will be the right one for me. I'm a picky bitch.
I too see your tats.
Kind Regards
Seren
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Ruby Lord
Tue, 2023-06-13 11:47
Hi Seren, thank you for your
Hi Seren, thank you for your comments and for reading my poem. Ruby :) xx
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Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2023-06-13 13:11
I'm still a biker!
I'm still a biker!
and can categorically state here and now!!
There ain't no tattoo that exists that
that enhances a wondrous woman's tits!!!
Though, I'm willing to be proven wrong,
just send some pics, n I'll smoke yer bong!!!
I think this is perhaps deeper and more personal than my flippant comment addresses.
Obi.
Seren
Wed, 2023-06-14 00:20
Obi
I am so jealous, I wish I could still ride I miss it so much!!
hugs to you both
Seren/Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Ruby Lord
Tue, 2023-06-13 14:09
Oooppps, sorry Obi, me tits
Oooppps, sorry Obi, me tits are too big for the camera :)
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