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Not Wasted
I never felt spending time with you was wasted
waking up next to your sleepy-beautiful smile.
Or my heart jumping a little with excitement
every time you came over.
Even when I laughed at your concern
about Orion's belt having so few notches.
We were good for a while. And I've always felt
that was what time was for.
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Comments
Lavender
Sun, 2024-06-23 15:28
Not Wasted
Hello, Michael,
Such a nice feeling to appreciate spent moments - the best investments in life!
Thank you,
L
Michael Anthony
Tue, 2024-06-25 09:14
Thanks for stopping by L!
Thanks for stopping by L! Appreciate your comments.
Best
Michael Anthony