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darkest night
inside each melody --
fragrant spark
playing round us
incandesces everything
at once
on light beams, songs
for their own pleasure play
desideratum's designedly
desiring desist of
insanity's mare of night
melodies play on
nonetheless, so there will
be light in darkest night.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Victorclaude
Sun, 2010-11-21 09:46
As always, thank you, Shirley
As always, thank you, Shirley.
Love,
Victor
"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."
Unknown (at least to me)
Bonitaj
Sun, 2010-11-21 11:14
VC
I really liked this theme and how you brought it to unexpected fruition in the last stanza!
melodies play on
nonetheless, so there will
be light in darkest night.
Regards
Bonitaj
Victorclaude
Sun, 2010-11-21 13:26
Bonitaj,
Bonitaj,
Thank you very much.
Victor
"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."
Unknown (at least to me)