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Junk
Motivation pulverised deep within a low down beat
With snapping fingers and a saturday night strut
Mr high slides by.
He is filled with arrogance and swagger
He's indestructible
A ladies man, a mans man, he seduces them all
Then he has them and the mask slips
His grip is vice like
Deathly it's hold.
His evil Hand drags them down
Into the bowels of the beast
Leaves them there to drown.
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Comments
Nordic cloud
Wed, 2012-03-07 09:47
Hells Angels
Is this "on the darkside" group lou?
For it is indeed dark.
I love this:-
"Motivation pulverised deep within a low down beat
With snapping fingers and a saturday night strut
Mr high slides by."
Not Mr Hyde?
Nordic cloud
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
Candlewitch
Wed, 2012-03-07 14:45
Dear Lou,
another great write. I am in awe. I wouldn't change a word of it!
always, Cat
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