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Inspired Love
Love is a spring,
a fountain of igniting hope,
to match a birth of an entity
that is you.
Then you get the touch
of a loving mom's fingers
your own delicate ones curve in
and
you know you are
being loved by someone.
The sojourn of life
takes care
and
each one of us has a share
of love and hatred,
as a pair,
none can be spared,
either.
As one ages past the life’s visit
then hope in human beings is born
when more folks loved, pass by
then many more are reborn .
I'm just one with you
give an ounce of it
the world will double it for you .
Albeit be genuine
that’s what is about being loved
loving comes true,
hence an adopted
pen name of mine..
Loved ,
wish you all knew
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Ian.T
Mon, 2012-03-12 03:27
Loved
Unconditional love runs the ever more, there is only truth in all things, as you become part of the whole but still remaining a singularity in the great plan.
Just embrace your feelings and keep writing, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Mon, 2012-03-12 03:38
You alone will ensure
my heart pumps poetry after all
and
I need to be indebted
loved