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liberation
liberation
aching carbon corpus
humiliating adventure --
diaphanated alarm
discovering humiliation
to be first step --
on path to liberation.
vcp
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
Kailashana2
Thu, 2010-12-09 11:17
Knocks our sails out for
Knocks our sails out for awhile, eh?
Humble pie is good. Food for thought (and the soul).
Kicks in the brain cells to make new neural connections.
;-)
Victorclaude
Thu, 2010-12-09 22:31
Indeed! Right you are.
Indeed! Right you are.
Grazie molto
"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."
Unknown (at least to me)