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Complicating Poetry
Then twas okay
there wasn't much else to do or say .
.today there are scores of hobbies
and
games on the Internet to play
can't we all have our own say
in simpler nuances
if I may so say .....
My master taught me
abab ab abc abc then aaabb cc
and
then I took off from there
abcd.... dcba
then free for all combination
thus I created free verse poetry
for better or worse
still many stalwarts do read
my verse...
thanks to thee..
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Sat, 2012-05-26 04:05
Well expressed dear loved .I
Well expressed dear loved .I understand
what you are saying but I am
sure your words will more glitter when
you rhyme and follow a meter..
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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loved
Sat, 2012-05-26 08:31
rhyming and metering
for me 'tis mouthwatering ..
shall have to learn
though its late in the evening of life,
the sun is now about to set..
But still
continue I will
loved
weirdelf
Sat, 2012-05-26 12:27
I agree with both of you
freeform and new formalism are fantastic, and not mutually exclusive.
But this poem is not fantastic, it's a wee whine.
Loved, your 'twas's and 'thee's deny your free poetry. And your persistently self-reflexive themes deny content.
Rula might disagree with me, but I suggest - don't write about your poetry and who reads you, write about beauty, passion, lies, truth etc etc see my signature,
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Sat, 2012-05-26 13:50
My respectful salutations
in full...
Loved, your 'twas's and 'thee's deny your free poetry. And your persistently self-reflexive themes deny content.
see my signature,
SEEN
loved