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Tinge
That entire one wants to see
must be beautiful,
colorful, spectacular too
a tinge of beauty
lips thin
eyes blue
rosy cheeks
wow a dimple too
a tint
of all that is desirous
of a feline you,
a smile
a cheer with a whiskyness, about you
your thoughts of ecstasy and love so true
a trace of every thing
those have you,
is all that what most of us want
to have of you
just a tinge!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
weirdelf
Tue, 2012-07-24 23:22
oh! My mouth open with avid appreciation
"When she was good she was very very good,
when she was bad she was horrid"
You are a complex and beautiful poet at your best and I am deeply grateful that you persist.
"You're a better man than I am, Gunga Din"
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Wed, 2012-07-25 01:27
you are the bestest here we all know frnd Jess missed uuuuuuuuuu
You are a complex and beautiful poet
at your best ...(RARELY THOUGH)
and
I am deeply grateful that you persist....HAHAHAAHH... EXIST YOU MEAN ....Jess...
"You're a better man than I am,
allah din ... why gangaaaaaaa???
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weirdelf
Wed, 2012-07-25 01:54
Well, I know I am very good
and the bad of the worst.
The idea of expressing words to their utmost capability is my being.
Track me. I haven't written a good poem in a long time. I lost confidence in my ability to write poetry, because I thought I became dysfunctionally insane. And took psyche drugs that put cotton wool in my head and lost confidence in my ability. I still had the ability to help others, but that means nothing when I couldn't write good poetry. I feel lost. Felt lost. Maybe I will write some good poetry soon. Not maybe, I will. I lost my sense of my self. I lost the ability to love, have passion and write with passion and meaning.
I thought, in my lack of self confidence that I could not write poetry of value.
But it is coming back.
The nature of Jess is irrepressible.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Wed, 2012-07-25 05:56
shall revert on your discourse ... a bit later..
sometimes in haste
we waste....
out of my thousands
I can't find a dozen
but I'm striving for
just 51
when will this accomplishment be done
can i ask someone
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