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Dreams
The minds manifest has so many weights
one such corner has the best enclave
to reminisce for the events gone by
yet imagine ones ahead
in the creation of one’s mind
bold, stout and fervent
the dreams one gets are heaven sent,
if there be one
otherwise dreams are the seeds of rejuvenation
a man can only create and procreate
with visual injection
of thoughts deeds and action
which manifest from sheer virtual imagination
the impossible is a deterrent,
the positivity is cornered
in the dreams manifests,
hence we explore
to the far folds of unknown destinations
without dreams life would be naught
mere virtual imagination
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Comments
Eduardo Cruz
Tue, 2012-04-17 16:04
loved,
For me this is one of your best, coherent, fasinating and well constructed.
Bravo to you, I think that you have been listening and reading. I am impressed.
Eddie
...
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
loved
Tue, 2012-04-17 16:20
All your good wishes
thanks for coming by
after a long time
thanks you are wonderful
loved
loved
Tue, 2012-04-17 22:28
hello
cruz
loved
loved
Wed, 2012-04-18 13:07
Read once again...
you may like to comment
some one
thanks in advance,...
loved
Candlewitch
Wed, 2012-04-18 13:35
Dear Loved,
I beleive this is one of your best poems to date! It knocked me right outta my socks!!!
a man can only create and procreate
with visual injection
of thoughts deeds and action
which manifest from sheer imagination
the impossible is a deterrent,
the positivity is cornered
in the dreams manifests,
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
loved
Wed, 2012-04-18 14:38
Sometimes I feel
how I can write best poetry
without any substantial knowledge
then I feel as beauty lies
in the eyes of a beholder
twas similar perhaps beauty poetic
must lie in the minds eye
of poets like you.
thank you Cat
you are graceful
loved
weirdelf
Wed, 2012-04-18 23:07
Truly a gem, a precious one.
You make me wait, you bugger!
This is intelligent, thoughtful and beautifully written.
One tiny suggestion-
sheer virtual imagination
mere virtual imagination
The slight change of meaning would enhance the difference between random dreaming and active creativity implied in the poem.
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Thu, 2012-04-19 02:42
Thank you ever so much
it's my pleasure
to accept wisdom ..
shall do
thanks to you..
loved
Roscoe Lane
Thu, 2012-04-19 03:01
Nice poem,
Nice poem but what about nightmares are they not also dreams LOL, Sorry just having fun. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
loved
Thu, 2012-04-19 10:20
No, abs no ,you are abs right
an aspect which slipped my sight ,
as i drop dead ,
at the drop of a hat ,
when tired flat ....
so night mares
I DON'T SEE
but in dreams
they can monster anyone
including me....
next dream i shall concentrate
at Roscoe's link
and update...
loved
weirdelf
Thu, 2012-08-30 16:46
you have copped the worst of my abuse
and some of the best of my praise
I thank you for your generosity of spirit
and name you poet, one who has worked at it.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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loved
Thu, 2012-08-30 20:56
Salaams for your
Blessings
poet /bard
loved