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supercede
light flickers
and taps trickle
far ago
the summer hush
descends to the dark dank lush
of falls crush
peppermint kiss
from cellophane tryst
a cold red dusk
coating light
through mist
haunted and colored
with whats been
done
in the shadows
and statues
of whats
begun
Last few words:
in the claw of wind
the twisted branch
where snow now
weeps
what we never keep
like lockets of love
in the shape of the
heart
to cling to this
in the winter storms
that start
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Comments
sueb
Mon, 2012-12-31 05:33
beautiful x
beautiful x
Esker
Wed, 2013-01-02 22:13
I love your writing Sueb
its direct and says straight up desire..Love..passion
thoughts....Its not the heard sell..but the beatbox of
what is on...And I love your subtle works too
if you find this beautiful thank you....
loved
Mon, 2012-12-31 08:31
just the right thing
to recall,on a cold wintery night
as the old year does fall
and
2013 does make a call...
loved
Esker
Wed, 2013-01-02 22:21
Loved..
Im glad you are here writing
and leaving a comment
on this...
You know I like and love your works
contro and ultra and all
everyone rewriting what they are lately
but we know
the harsh cruel tactics
thank god for cameras
and memory cards
my journalistic voyeur
wants keeps tagging
and pasting and setting
in my bags for those to
open come my death
all clips I drag and paste
and copy and photo
along my path
so the real story comes
alive..............
I dont know whom you are loved
and dont care
what I know is that you are here
from when I arrived and so on since
2007...
only antiquated fools
never take a pic
never make a note
for the board of enquiry
that may come along
and question all the hosts
I love forensics
my great passion
studying systems my great
love
click click
loved
Thu, 2013-01-03 05:30
'''dont know whom you are loved and dont care...'''
that's the spirit
and
it's a treat reading you too
you are more unique
than one can ever fatasize
loved