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moms love
I think i shall also abandon poetry
and
write plain and simple prose
so many poems
on mothers did I compose
many were better than prose
as sentiments for mothers... we... can only convey
once in a life's unique way
as nothing on earth can replace a mother
why...
because only she does lifelong bother
to be with us all our lives
mothers love comes before wives
even after she has left
Oh my gosh
what a surprise
so for a mother's love
praise
in a standing ovation all rise...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Frenchf
Fri, 2013-01-04 15:02
I love my mother too
Who doesn't? Just curious. My brothers had mixed love hate. Standing ovation for all mothers. lovely
loved
Fri, 2013-01-04 20:36
Wellall I can say is
thanks in capitals
loved
Jenifer James
Fri, 2013-01-04 17:34
I'm working on a mother poem
I'm working on a mother poem at the moment. Being one, I want unconditional love/ having had one, I'm not so sure.
Jenifer Jaspa James
Frenchf
Fri, 2013-01-04 17:40
As time passes
All the supposed wrong they did fades into the background and only the good is remembered
loved
Fri, 2013-01-04 20:37
you are that mother
I'd love to have
All the best
loved
Frenchf
Fri, 2013-01-04 23:26
Adoption
If you are young enough and I am old enough for you to be my natural born child xxx
loved
Sat, 2013-01-05 03:56
perhaps
as you mayn't know
the number of dawns
I have scored ,
maybe it could be the other way around ..
anyway ...
its kind of you
to have respected mothers true .
I am an actor of poetry
I get into the garb
of anyone who so desires
to extract ...
an emotion ...
no motion
loved
Frenchf
Sat, 2013-01-05 06:21
Age
What an amazing way to describe age! The number of dawns I have scored. Scribbler, mother love is despite knowing your child is a mass murderer!
loved
Sat, 2013-01-05 07:25
only a mom can convince any judge
her child is juvenile
at all ages
so pardon him ...
thanks for counting the dawns
why scribble???
loved
scribbler
Fri, 2013-01-04 21:48
Hi Loved
I reckon mothers love us because they are blind to our faults lol. A nice tribute to those who are blinded by love..............stan
Seren
Sat, 2013-01-05 00:49
loved
My greatest joy in life is being a mum .... I know my kids have faults but I find it hard to see them Lol
I really liked this
Well done
Love Jc xxx
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