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Happy birthday dear Aquarians wef 21 Jan all years ..
A very Happy Birthday
to all AQUARIANS
Beauty rebounds in your folds
you are soft and sweet too
so many love you
but you must take care of flatterers
who try to woo you...
ere you fall too
but since 'tis your birthday today
in the light of sun may you stay..
have a Happy Birthday
and bathe also today..
the beaches are warm still
they beckon you in bikinis,
if you only will...
Happy Birthday
to all
AQUARIANS
today
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Free verse
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Comments
Seren
Thu, 2013-01-24 03:05
Happy Birthday !!
nice poem for our Aquarian friends, how true some of it is ... I am a virgo long time before I get another Bday
I cant see anything to change its a tribute and as you know I am loath to offer changes to things like this
nicely done my friend
love JC xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Thu, 2013-01-24 03:08
a word from you is like a gold mine
for a simplistic person like me
thanks you are a great find..
loved
Seren
Thu, 2013-01-24 03:12
hahaha I will have to start
hahaha I will have to start charging per word then !! smiles for miles
love JC xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Thu, 2013-01-24 03:19
Then I will have to auction
my holy pockets
do you know
once when i was very poor
my class teacher commented
seeing my lovely green sweater
ung one
ur more
HOLEY
than
Righteous..
haa hahahhaa
loved
Seren
Thu, 2013-01-24 03:24
lmao !! funny I will go you
lmao !! funny I will go you halves in whatever you receive at auction
Jayne-Chloe x :))
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Frenchf
Thu, 2013-01-24 16:52
Loved you believe in star signs
Are you Aquarians?
loved
Fri, 2013-01-25 02:09
I write abiout just about
every and anything
people get baffled you too
you are a Libra are you?
May be LEO
loved
Ian.T
Fri, 2013-01-25 03:57
Loved
Just wait for the cusp to pass
After Pisces , Aries is free at last
then you should honour my fiery ways
with presents that with light my days
I hear that my birthstone is a diamond
Zircon will do, as of them, I am fond
But give me a surprise that will light my eye's
A pure crystal of carbon hope you don't realise
Until it is sent on its way to me, just one carat will do,
I shall sell the damn thing and buy a ticket to visit you..
La, La, it is I Sparrow, young bard
I taunt you as it is not so hard
Yenti, and Ian.T wont be out soon
I have lost the key to the dark room..
ROTFLM feathered AO
Yours Sparrow
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Fri, 2013-01-25 02:12
YOU Are yet to be born ..in Aries eyes .... wait
Ian for some while
after Pisceans you know
and ere they go
26 TH MARCH EH!
loved