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come kiss me... don't take it seriously read by 120 already elsewhere
I need to be kissed no,
none does me give this bliss….
I yearn more for a kiss
than some joker commenting on this
my missing of a kiss …
I hope soon someone will send a pack too…
no, not of cigarettes
but of kisses
as I open the envelope, all kisses will fly
to catch all like a butterfly
I shall try
hope I can savour some and share
the runaway ones
come sweethearts across the Internet,
I'm here lonely,
in the darkness, what I miss is
nothing more than blooming kisses,
maybe some rose may kiss!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2013-02-19 18:21
Nice St. Valentine's
Day poem, Loved. I hope that you recieved as many kisses as you could take without being suffocated!
~ Geezer
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loved
Tue, 2013-02-19 23:36
Yeah and thanks
for this one...
wasn't choked
but all over soaked
loved
Frenchf
Thu, 2013-02-21 07:53
i liked the kisses flying
out of the envelope
loved
Thu, 2013-02-21 09:07
gr8888888888888
could you catch any
loved