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hello geremia
emotional courageous and so true
we all still love you..
your words of wisdom
so fresh anew
as you slowly reach the horizon
which is far away in the distance
the dawn of light
sees another poem,
from you for us today...
many more shall and will come our way,
if you have a positive will
you'll much longer stay
and help mankind in all walks of life
in poetic armoury
be that today's
Neopoets fashionary....
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Comments
weirdelf
Wed, 2013-02-27 01:00
Your kindness is palpable, Loved,
yet Joe has told us he is nearing his end. Don't enforce his denial, though it is true that hope and belief are of great power.
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Wed, 2013-02-27 06:45
it is 27th
is he or is he not?
loved
weirdelf
Wed, 2013-02-27 06:52
27th?
He has been predicting his end for a while. Perhaps that's what keeps him going.
I have come to love his death wish, it probably keeps him alive.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry