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S u b t l e m a t i o n z ...
overlap
falling
see through like a ghost
we cycle through our walls
inflexible and tumbling
snowflakes
walls torn apart
by the ideal and principle
of war
Lifers we carrry on
dusted and bruised
bloodied with our
eyes
hooded
letters scented with home
Love strength
weakness
ghosts
the greatests power
spirits
rising like whitecaps
rushing towards
the hestitant future
so sure
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Comments
loved
Fri, 2013-05-24 14:46
WHAT is this all about
some war??
or HALLUCINATIONS
more likely
loved
ida
Fri, 2013-05-24 16:38
into this world we are thrown--the jim
instincts drag
the quarry
heads scraped
eyes pleading
the dark night lights
silent
hearts warm with
the knowledge of
sages whispers
this poem is superb
it will widen the pile of favorites thank you
Esker
Sat, 2013-05-25 12:08
Intellect like Keys....Doors of Perception
Most wait like restless revellers for their chosen invite...
but not everyone knows the world beyond most doors
Some remain closed....
revel Away.....
Intelligence is the Key...
is everything
mazes dont confound people as it does bore their
simplistic drives
But I love the articulated hunger of those
driven drifters seeking
hunting
finding treasure
by fingertips in questionable darkness
I remember the wreck divers post civil war
using only diving bells and candlelit or lamps
sinkign to the bottom to pore over wrecks for
treasures of which in Riverboat commerce trade
there was much....the river would reduce and reveal
the small world of pressure
how intelligence is like this
a special brethren and sisterhood
my "pile" of favourites...
as dear as a Chaise Lounge
with a very own Jupiter!!
sing on Jim
the snowflakes fall
through the cherry tree
the flooring plant lamps
shall glow all night
Thank You Ida.....