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Mermaid
glittering
the tail dreams
sated with salt
the bitter sea
taste
from scales
to gooseflesh
damp permeations
like a wave froth
captured in the dimples
and resting on the
upper lip
submerged and risen
depth promise
swells
damp valley
runs
alive in sunlight
sequined
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Comments
Rula
Sat, 2013-09-07 14:37
liked
"the sound in
sated with salt
the bitter sea
taste"
and of course the images and the last few lines
If you only consider some punctuation, it would just be really great!
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Esker
Fri, 2013-09-27 14:43
I only thought of I in Publication
instead of the we of readers
the pleasure of poetry
its craft wake to merge in
and swiftly swirl imagery
imagination and depths
brought forth with its
passage
this magic of the craft
loved
Sat, 2013-09-07 16:33
All I can and will say
tis lovely ur imagination
beyond clouds of normalcy
a great metaphorical poet
you still be
loved
Esker
Fri, 2013-09-27 14:44
I continue to enertain
with this work of mine
and at this Beautiful place
Neopoet the Bold!