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wounded
In for repairs :)
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Sun, 2013-11-10 04:06
My dear Jayne
Is it you that's in for repair or the Poem ???
Just thought I would ask.
Take care and know we are thinking of you,
Yours Ian, and Friends
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Seren
Sun, 2013-11-10 06:54
Ian
Definitely the poem in for repair at the moment I am not doing too shabby :) the poem was not up to my standards I will work on it and consider reposting it
love always JC xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats