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WHAT YOU HAVE GIVEN ME
I -
Insouciant
ingracious
indifferently
benign
You -
courageous,
flagrantly outspoken -
have opened
my mind
Nestling joy
suckles at this breast
Awakened longing
from what was
an insensate mess
A ratchet to my desires
has been wrenched at the wheel
I am alive again
I breath
I feel
7-01-13
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Comments
Seren
Tue, 2013-01-08 06:14
Exquisite ... I can't see
Exquisite ... I can't see anything I would change
Nice work Boni
Love Jc xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Bonitaj
Tue, 2013-01-08 14:08
Thanks JC
Great to hear back from you!
Stay well.
Bonitaj
loved
Sun, 2013-10-27 17:07
Such beautiful words
left unread
the dictionary one would have to refer
that's why
I compose simple in words
a kid can't dispose
loved