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Call It What You Will (Page 2)

Submitted by brittle light on Sat, 2012-06-09 13:05

old monk
spouts ancient wisdom
a burst of laughter

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sunny afternoons
tall and thin
lovely shadow

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falling to pieces
stone to gravel
pet rock bites the dust

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dandelion puffs
gracefully riding the wind
knowing not of weeds

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august moon sparkles
sleepy mind in half-dream
butterflies sip tea

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snowflakes in sunshine
swift comes the end
the shape of water

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standard brand loser
no reason for happiness
am anyway, Ha!

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a shift in the wind
an old hound sniffs the air
decisions are made

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Candlewitch

Mon, 2012-06-25 12:16

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I will call it observations and bits of wisdom.

always, Cat

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brittle light

Sat, 2012-07-07 12:45

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thank you for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate that (even though my reply is very late in coming)

Al

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