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The Cracked Urn
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waxing rhapsodic
gilded actor of the quill
writing beautiful lies
just for the thrill
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Psyve
Fri, 2010-11-26 06:30
Almost Haiku-like in its
Almost Haiku-like in its simplicity, I enjoyed this one for the meaning it conveyed in 4 lines:
An elegant write.
A poet on a poet, to my reading!
Psyve
Kailashana2
Fri, 2010-11-26 06:37
Thank you....reminds me of
Thank you....reminds me of one of the most simple (and therefore complex) and elegant lines of all time...
"There's a crack in everything,
that's how the light gets in." ~ Leonard Cohen