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Disinformation
DISINFORMATION
Do you believe in what you are seeing
Do you believe in what you are hearing
Do you believe in what you are reading
Do you believe in what you are tasting
Do you believe in what you are feeling
Do you believe in asking yourself what you are believing in
Do you think the answer would be the truth
Or disinformation
What´s your answer??
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
What are hoping??
That somebody out there in the community has an answer
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2022-06-29 08:10
It's hard...
to believe that anyone has the answer! Not a definitive one anyway. There is so much information out there, some of it true, some not so true, and some of it outright lies. I guess, it depends on your perspective. I am not such a big fan of repetitive
lines, but it is an effective way to ask this question without having to get all involved in a big long poem. Lol
Not much to say about rhyme, rhythm or pattern, and certainly nothing to say about language use. Interesting, I hope to see more from you and see what you've got. ~ Geezer.
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-06-29 08:41
hello Stanley,
welcome to Neopoet! it is very nice to meet you. I hope you are finding your way around the site. if you have any problems or questions that I can help with, just ask any Advocate, including me :)
your poem asks a lot of questions, but I think you have left out the most important one, is that so? I too would like to read more of your poetic work. so keep writing!
always, Cat & eddy styx
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One
Wed, 2022-06-29 10:03
I guess...
...most people are trapped in the five sense world which would mean the answer to most questions is yes. They may say the answer is the Truth or maybe not the Truth, even if they think the answer isn't the Truth, do they seek answers outside the normal programmed world...probably not.
Stepping outside the mainstream world of controlled media, religion, science, medicine & politics & seeing the truth behind the Problem/Reaction/Solution scenarios may allow them to open their eyes, ears etc & really see the world for what it is.
We live in a world of disinformation
I know all this because I read it on Facebook!! LOL!!
regards
One.
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"with all that I am & all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me"
Jackweb
Thu, 2022-06-30 03:54
Rhetorical questions!
Rhetorical questions are non -literal questions designed to emphasis an idea and encourage discussions.
It allows the reader a moment of pause and think about the question.
Mostly, not meant for an answer!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-07-01 14:21
Ich möchte der Erste sein, der Sie auf Deutsch begrüßt.
Ich spreche oder verstehe kein Celtic.
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Stanlee the poe...
Fri, 2022-07-01 14:53
hi Danke Kamerad sei begrüßt
hi Danke Kamerad sei begrüßt