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Echo's Litany
Echo's realm is your sub conscience mind
Weaving words for you to find
A continuous litany,like a Mobius Strip
Sleep is the trigger that will trip
Born on the ash of a lost ember
In fitful dream
To be remembered
the laughter
Echo etches images
upon corridor walls
there in your memory
to be recalled
the words
Echo hums a familiar song
You've not heard it for so long
soft,softer
echo,echo gone
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
China Blue
Mon, 2012-03-26 11:29
Lon
many thanks again
Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)
Candlewitch
Mon, 2012-03-26 11:15
Dear Chrys,
Your fertile mind, which comes through in all your works, is astounding. Good title, excellent imagery and flow through. I love the concept!
always, Cat (& eddy)
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China Blue
Mon, 2012-03-26 11:30
Cat
my thanks to you good lady will tell you why this was written but not here
Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)