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God and Moses Have A Chat
God said:
"I got five commandments, already".
Moses said:
"How much you vont for them, my dear?"
God said:
"They're free, yet."
And Moses said:
"I'll take two packs, Oy vay."
Style / type:
Free verse
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Not Explicit Content
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Dandini
Wed, 2021-01-27 12:20
I found this under the
I found this under the "undiscovered works" tab - it is very funny. I am amazed that no one has commented on it for eight months - is there no justice?
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scribbler
Wed, 2021-01-27 14:00
This former member was kicked off site for repeatedly ignoring
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Dandini
Thu, 2021-01-28 11:37
I am tempted to read more.
I am tempted to read more.
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