The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem, "Growing Older," is a haiku, a traditional form of Japanese poetry. It follows the 5-7-5 syllable pattern, which is a common structure for this type of poem. The theme of aging is effectively communicated through the metaphor of a dying fire, which is a powerful image that evokes feelings of nostalgia and melancholy.

However, the poem could benefit from a more vivid use of language. While "Youth's fire now wanes" is a strong opening line, "Embers flicker in the dark" is somewhat generic. Consider using more specific imagery to create a more immersive experience for the reader. For example, you could describe the color, warmth, or smell of the embers to add another layer of sensory detail.

The final line, "Kindling memories," is a clever play on words, as "kindling" can refer to both the act of starting a fire and the act of sparking a memory. However, the connection between this line and the preceding lines could be made clearer. Consider revising this line to more directly tie in with the metaphor of the dying fire.

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the location and the vernacular spoken in that locale, [fire] can be one syllable or two. Not that you have made a mistake; just wanted you to know that in many locales, fire would be only one syllable. I'm sure that you have used the proper dialect for your place in Pennsylvania. Good job, Clentin, as usual. ~Geez.
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