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for his howling heart...

Submitted by Valyrianne on Tue, 2013-11-26 10:28

angular
defined by the crooks
of letters
turned so that
their faces twist
into sheer delight

blazing
as open windows
in a burning house
so hot that the frame
morphs
into his haunted face

strong
if only for fleeting glimpses
into the future
that never came
and the passion

the passion
that has always
been

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

loved

Tue, 2013-11-26 16:11

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....''''''and the passion

the passion...''''

change one to take
and the other one to make
use different words you have just joined Stan's
word changing world

loved

loved

Tue, 2013-11-26 22:16

loved's picture

can you give a similar suggestion
on my maestro one
thanks in advance

loved

Esker

Fri, 2013-11-29 01:11

Esker's picture

smitten smelters

winter curls flat its vivid sharpness
sinking into the exposed
the early darkness

here..there..

a magnificent poem
a true passion

thank you poet

. . .

Esker

Sun, 2015-09-13 18:26

Esker's picture

mid way through sept.....
your poetry then
I felt...
recall reading...
a loop...
thank U

Esker

Sun, 2015-09-13 18:28

Esker's picture

au loup

Esker

Fri, 2016-08-05 15:17

Esker's picture

supp...excellent poem...
bored out of my gourd today
dug into the old timey stuff
re posting this...

middle of work here...

our gardens beautiful
love summer...
the heat...
all the proper girls in
cotton dresses
girly wear
Im always on my sidewalk
biker bike zooming about
checking em out...
Miss the old Neopoet
dayz of then
chats...

but modern it is...
and nothing wrong
with enjoying an old
read...
the old look back

tah

cheers!!

Mr Wolfie Face!

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