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Hugs

Submitted by Rosewood Apothecary on Wed, 2022-08-31 05:34

Constant longing of our days

Tears of wonton hope

We cry this time not for sadness

Having little else to cope

I feel this often too

I’m swept under the rug

One thing always brings me back

The warm embrace of a loving hug

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Geezer

Wed, 2022-08-31 06:04

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best served fresh and warm, right out of the heart. Your title is simple, yet evocative of strong emotion. I don't think there are many people out there, that don't enjoy a good hug. Nice read and good feel. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack

Wed, 2022-08-31 17:20

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are simply the best! They tend to make all else disappear and calm an uneasy heart. This poem is short and sweet. I think we all could use a hug sometimes!

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lovedly

Thu, 2022-09-01 17:59

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keep hugging
many are wanting lovingly they are still struggling for warm hugging all are welcome by me in CORRIDORS of time still stand in waiting silently

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