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Hunger for votes.
First eat those around you,
then when flesh no longer satiates;
fall upon your own body
and devour the bits that everyone hates.
When you've chewed through to the bile
blacker than a bible
and blessed your flesh
for what is cursed;
start in on your marrow thighs
and follow down past the shins
hard kicking every bleeding sin
to your feet upon this dank earth.
Should you find you still hunger,
lust for more and thrust your spirit
void around the universe of the living
and seek out minds
that resemble yours
then feast on them for all their giving,
is precisely what your'e worth.
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Free verse
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Comments
Rula
Thu, 2016-04-21 10:58
Hello Chrys
You've spoted the political game quite well.
Well said!
P.s. Last line "you're"... a typo
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