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My Darling Orchid

Submitted by Lavender on Tue, 2024-04-23 20:12

tiny bud unfurls
blossom dips her silken face
humble elegance

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft
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Earn A Poem Workshop 1
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Wed, 2024-04-24 10:17

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been working in your garden, I can tell. Beautiful Haiku! ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Wed, 2024-04-24 11:44

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A friend gave me an orchid several years ago. Hasn't bloomed since. The past month or so, it has been continuously blossoming. So graceful! This is a little ditty to honor it.
Thank you!
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