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In my element
I make my rules,
And live by them,
Its what I choose,
Without regret.
My own peace first,
Before anything else,
I Won't compile stress,
On my free life desk.
I am calm and crazy,
Both at a time,
I won't give you nice,
When you give me limes.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2023-01-19 12:05
Absolutely ...
perfect, with no reservations, either in message or form. ~ Geezer.
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Hussainy
Thu, 2023-01-19 12:36
Geezer
Thank you
We are all suppose to learn to put our own self first before anything else
author commentHussainy
Sat, 2023-01-21 11:31
@Ekaterina
Thank you for understanding
author commentRoseBlack
Sun, 2023-01-22 12:53
Strong message
Always your own mental health and well being before anything else- you can't be a help to others, if you are feeling poorly yourself! Good job!
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-01-22 15:34
hello,
I think you have a firm grasp of the situation. good work!
*hugs, Cat
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