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Nothing is worth more than this day (Goethe) - an acrostic
nebulous wandering
over epochs of eternities
time
heaping unto us
infinite
nows
gifting our becoming
interweaving
souls into a
wonder of miracles
orbiting aeons
rhythmically
tracing sketches and profiles of
heroes and heroines
manifesting in an
orgy of
revolution, turmoil
entities colliding
transmuting
happiness and sorrow
and in this particular
now
tide moved to encourage, and
hour
in its infinite wisdom
supported my plea, so
divinity
aligned destiny, preparing a place where
you and I could meet
.
.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Ian.T
Wed, 2012-07-18 18:45
Judy
A lovely Acrostic work , some find them hard , but there are other forms that are very hard in the Acrostic way but this is fine and well written,
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
judyanne
Thu, 2012-07-19 10:15
thank you ian
for the kind review
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Kailashana2
Wed, 2012-07-18 19:32
Wow. You said a mouthful,
Wow. You said a mouthful, quite elegantly I might add.
~A
judyanne
Thu, 2012-07-19 10:16
dear anna
thank you very much :)
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
scribbler
Thu, 2012-07-19 12:08
Hi Judy
I do well to do acrostics with one syllable words lol. Now if you Really want to show off make it rhyme lmao...........stan PS meter was a bit off (couldn't help myself lol)
judyanne
Fri, 2012-07-20 12:28
haha - very funny scribbles
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)