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O O O O O OO000000 give me a Kiss ...eh many did u will

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2022-08-16 16:13

O O O give me a kiss eh

hahaahahaa
you said it friend

give me a kiss eh

never give in

when loss is assured
you may still win

I always advise my kids/and grand

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET

BUT DO ASK

IT MAY BECOME A ''YES''

ELSE HOW WILL IT EVER

IF YOU REMAIN silent quick silver

They smile and say
give a 100 dollars
right away

I can only afford ten
they take it are happy
and run away
then return

Kiss me on my nose
for free ...smilingly

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
JUST A SWEET MESSAGE TO MANY BE NOT NEGATIVE
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Wed, 2022-08-17 20:26

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feeling having grandchildren, hey? I'll bet that you are a hell of a grand poppy!
~ Geez.
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lovedly

Wed, 2022-08-17 21:40

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they four are very very beautiful in looks and heart
they love me so much
my children wonder how and why
I give them LOVE and flying kisses
even in my dreams
and as in pain if ever I do scream

They are my souls
keep me alive
for their love only
I shall forever stay alive

BLESS ALL WILL YE

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