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Passion Flower (disclaimer erotica)
Open up your world to me
Flower of your passion
Smell and taste of your perfume
Aesthetic of your fashion
Kiss delivered to your rose
Soft and delicate
Your petals growing into me
Dark and intricate
Blooming, pulsing, moving with
Pressures are applied
Pleasures are now building
And so I must abide
Tension growing towards release
Spasms taking hold
Nectar fills my mouth’s embrace
Which made your bloom explode
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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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U.S.A.
Favorite Poets
Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.
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Candlewitch
Thu, 2023-01-12 10:46
erotic and exotic!
I love this poem...it is like you just came alive... good luck on the contest!
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Geezer
Thu, 2023-01-12 16:04
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Hon
Fri, 2023-01-13 12:06
A beautiful written poem
Hi, Rosewood, a very beautiful written poem about a love theme with many well descriptive imaginary usage of word and metaphor. Simple but get to the point. Many figurative languages. This is the best poem that it stood out so far. Here are some example of the word usage that I like it.
“Open up your world to me”
Smell and taste of your perfume
Your petals are growing into me
“. “
Thank you and keep it up
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-13 17:32
Nice job
Erotic yet tasteful! Written with your usual passion and charm! Great job!!
~RoseBlack~