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phonograph a gun
* politicians use the front door o
what for , asterisk
score
tore!
toe!
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2014-02-04 01:39
Welcome to the Neo
I usually like brevity, sharp and straight to the point free verse, and
this is not an exceptional, yet the ending "toe !" is a bit hard bite.
Would really appreciate a hint if you care to get me a reader of yours :)
Again a very warm welcome.
Looking forward to reading more of your works.
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William Saint George
Sun, 2014-02-09 15:30
What are you trying to say
What are you trying to say here?
No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot
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